This is a minor quibble, but having the character ask the girl to repeat herself doesn't move the scene forward. Whenever I see dialog like this I start to lose interest because the scene isn't moving, it's stuttering. You can still have the guy respond to the questions that catches him off guard, and add information to the scene. "Aren't you a millennial?" "I don't understand why that's important." That would then force her next line to be more interesting than repeating her first line.
It's kinda like the 'yes and..' rule in improv, you don't always have to respond with "yes" but you have to add to the scene to keep thing interesting.
Take all that with a grain of salt though, you'll notice that almost none of my videos have dialog :D
I appreciate that he's dead. I think Tails should have been buried alive with Sonic though. I think that's what he would have wanted.
Nice animation, very well done.
lol thank you!
Was that the Ghostbusters car? Did the Ghostbusters make a ghost?!
Really awesome work man.
Sonic is dead? This make me happy. You know Mario pulled the plug right?
I've never seen consoles animated so well! And with a flare of nostalgia.
You had me at "Long lost twin father"!
What do we do now? Where do we go from here?
I didn't know Lyle was dead. I suppose this is a fitting tribute to his life.
That was a fun cartoon. I learned that if you let people walk all over you long enough, one of them will eventually shit on you too. Not bad for 7 hours of work!!
I'm happy to hear I taught you something. Thanks!
If Satan made a short film, this would be it. Great work!
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